Part II of My Review of Lightning Thief

Here are the few things I forgot in my last review--:

• The book starts out like, "IF YOU'RE READING THIS BECAUSE YOU THINGK THAT YOU  MIGHT BE ONE, MY ADVICE IS:  CLOSE THIS BOOK RIGHT NOW."  That is too much like Lemony Snicket.  Too many people have been copying that, for example Pseudonymous Bosch.
• When Percy's at a "certain place," he see's that the guy at the front desk is reading a big book with a wizard on it; Harry Potter.

wow...

but I liked it.